The story begins when a bad boy named bill started saying bad words a lot of times. The next day his father heared him say something bad and he scolded him. After a week he heard it again swearing and he punished him again. Then after a few days he heard him again swearing so he tought of a punishment. Everytime he sweared he had to put a button in the button jar. The buttons came from his clothing so if he misbehave he will have no buttons on his clothes.
And by the looks of the picture he didn´t undertood his lesson. He continued swearing and swearing and putting and putting buttons in the jar. Then after a few months he watched how full the button jar was. He could barely put any more buttons into it. Next after all those months of swearing he couldn´t use his shirts cause they had no buttons. So he started to behave good. And every week he behaved good his father let him take out a few buttons out of the jar. And by the end of the year all his clothes were back with buttons again.
That was a very nice story Pablo. It certainly fits the one of the coins we had to put in a bottle because of saying bad words. Perhaps the only bad comment I'll make is that you forgot to bold the topic and concluding sentences. Too bad, but may that make you realize you need to read directions slower.
ReplyDeletereally funny story certainly. I laught a little inside. A wierd punishment for a kid, don't you think? Well, as long as it works, its okey I think...
ReplyDeleteA good story.
Pablo, i really liked your story, and i agree with Alain and Erick and all they said, everybody should get punished like that so in that way we're going to see how bad we are destroying our language.
ReplyDeletecool post
ReplyDeletei really like it
it make sense xD