The Career I want to study

Well, I don't have an specified career to take on becuase I really like various of them, they al include and have one thing in common:
-They are all sciences and include math's.

I'm really good at analyzing chemestry and physics problems and would really like to study on of this assingments such as a biological chemist or a mathematitian pshysician, but if I get to choose of one of this would most be a biological chemist becuase I really like when it's to seeing a chemical reaction and it's really intersting to know why things really change such as the water cycle or the transformation of salt into their to original elements, Chlorine and Sodium, these compund, even thought when their elements (Chlorine and Sodium) are in their element form, they are toxic(The case of the gas Chlorine) and explosive(case of sodium) but when combined after certain process they make a compund that is used in daily life.

I think that if I get to choose this career in 2 years, I would end it up and specialize in the medicine development, I think that it is one of the best forms to apply and work as a biological chemist becuase you really put into action all the knowledge you have, and medicines are in constant changes so you would have a job until you aren't usefull in the area or you can't afford work.

Most of all I would really like to have a profession that I really like, and even better related to the basic sciences and even further and more specialized forms and views of this. I think that as a professionist in the biological chemist area would be one of the most difficult to get but one of the more interesting and amazing professions that someone would get to have becuase you can finally understand the truth before the reality and what you can see. I would say that I'm the best analyzing mathematical problems conbined with chemestry so that's one reason I would like this career. I can really be quick so I wouldn't have many problems.

I think that in this career I can learn more than what I expect, even thought there's still a long way for me to study the career but even thought it isn't today, one day I'm gonna be there and it's better for me to prepare since now.

Blog assignment # 4

Team, this is our first partial assignment. Check http://awprepauvm.blogspot.com/ for more information.

Here are the topics each one of you chose. You cannot switch theme:

-Leunam Duarte #1: The career I want to study.

-Marcos Quijada #5: Why many teenagers don't read the newspaper.

-Pablo Gastelum #7: Music videos.

-Alain Jiménez #9: How to resolve an argument peacefully.

-Erick Pasten #10: An important film.

Remember, your prewriting has to be written as a commentary for this section. Also, DO NOT FORGET TO COMMENT ON AT LEAST 2 OF YOUR TEAMMATES PREWRITINGS. Your comment must be a helpful one. I may consider the possiblility of erasing a bad comment. Be creative, and remember: after this, you still have to do your essay on your own for thursday 26 2009!

Do not make any mistakes! Consecuences shall be strict this time!

Picture Prompts Blog Assignment #3

What's this hat story, you ask me?, well, i think we should start from the very begining it all started like this...

It was the first day of vacations, little boy Armani was walking when he suddenly watched it for the very first time, it was what he had been looking for, a white hat, with different colored stripes in the bottom, it was perfect, after he saw it, he went and asked for the price. The hat was really expensive, it was worth 50.99 dlrs and for little boy Armani, that was a high sum. Little boy Armani resigned and promised himself not to return back until he had the money to buy that hat.

The years passed, and Armani had invented the cloth company, Armani Outfitters, an enterprise such famous that got millions and millions the day, that day, Armani went back to that store, and asked for that hat. He was tolded that the hat was sold several years ago to a wealthy man of the town, Armani walked back and go out of the store. Then, after hearing the notice, he went to the old man's house, where he espected to see the hat again. When he got there, he saddened again when he knew that the hat had been sold to a collectionist in france about 2 weeks ago. Armani declared himself as unlucky. Before Armani left, the old man told him, that the hat would be subastated next week in a nearby city. Armani got happy at that moment and left. The next week, Armani was at the auction but didn't offer anything, he waited and waited, until the hat touched the light, the auction started with 1,000,000., Armani took the front edge and offered 20,000,000 from the beginning, he thought he had won but a man suddenly doubled the offer, Armani did the same until the auction was overpassing the 500,000,000 dlrs. Everyone didn't knew what to expect, both we're gonna give it all for that hat. A moment later, the other man offered the last auction, 999,999,999 dlrs, Armani opened wide his eyes, he didn't knew what to do but saw the relief sight in the other man, so he increesed the auction by one, the other man was in a completely bancrupt. SOLDED saided the man. Armani cried of the emotion, standed up, glanced at the people, took his price, and got out of there.

They have passed 2 years since that, Armani stills has the hat, but he never weared it, he placed the hat in a crystal container, where it is right now, as you can see in the photo.
This is a real story, it happened to the friend of the boyfriend of the cousin of my mother.

Hat (Blog Assignment #3)

Dancing was my life...yeah it was... Recently i had to finish with the thing that i loved to do the most, not because not having talent, but for the destiny and everything else. Today i feel so guilty and so angry but what should i do?. First i was the best dancer of my crew, everybody felt proud of me, my mom, my dad, my brothers, but now they'r only ashamed of everything i did and i won. But that doesnt matter, the bad comments are the one's that always destruct us, yes... all those comments that make our head think a lot about if i'm doing the correct or just losing my time.
While i'm writting this letter, i'm remembering all the good moments and the last ones, the day i won my first trohpy, next the day i almost won that battle with my neighbor, and finally the day i decide to leave my white hat like a boxer or a contender when is hanging his gloves, anouncing his retirement, just for a commentary of a person jealous of me, only because i was the best and he spoke badly of me, hurting all my people and making me feel evil and making me think over simultaneously, but well... i wont do it again, I lost all the gained things and now the whole world thinks that I am a crooker and that I never deserved anything of what I won, only for breaking the rules once and for not facing the consequences when they challenged me. I leave this white hat full of histories, hoping that someone takes it and hoping that it gives the same luck that it gave me, though, so... remember, something can go out badly and the people will realize the power of this hat;I hope that they do not abuse of it as I did and find the person in charge of that made it.

-J.T.M

Road (Blog Assignment #3)

Im stucked at a road... with nowhere to go, I'm cold, I'm scared and don't know what should I do. I remember the fist thing I did today, which was helping my father collect the crops. But then everything turned blurry. I must have spend 3 hours working and then I must have gone home. But I can't recall what happened next. I just woke up on this road with nothing but my cloaths. By the position of the sun, I can say it's almost midday, which is weird because I started working at 11:30 a.m. Did it alreay passed a day ? two ? Who knew... I am stucked here alone in a road.

Is this the work of the landlord's man? I remember they had gone home to ask for the rent to my father before, but this time, he seemed really upset. He said that during their visit, they threatened him if he didn't payed on time. I suddenly recalled everything that had happened to me. I was kidnnaped at the field while I came home by the landlord's man. They hit me in the head really hard an I passed out in pain. A moment later, they carried me to their car and took me far away. Then they threw me in this road... I finally remember what happened... I just don't know where am I...

Shopping cart (Blog assignment # 3)

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The day before, our market had an accident. Our clients said that the culprit was the cart. By the time everything became to order, we had understood better the situation. It was a simple one. First, some goon leaves a cart in the hill of the parking because he was hurried. Then, the cart is pushed by some kids "accidentaly" ,causing the cart to go downhill at the speed of a bike at full power. Finally, a poor woman gets hit by the cart, loses balance, and falls in the middle of our street, and gets hit by OUR rented car, to damn it all. In other words, a woman got killed by a daredevil cart. How peculiarly touching.

But the day was just to begin. Every single thing that had to go wrong got worse. Thousands of demands screamed in our ears, at the point that I couldn't even hear my own thinking. Next, the mall is now in danger of being shut by the town, and eventually, my money had to leave the ol' wallet because the family of the woman said so. And yet... yet... I receive today blackmail in my desk, signed by no other but by the woman that was killed yesterday. It was hilarious, I tell you. I wanted to laugh my brains at this stupid joke and end it all right there. Guess what was my consolation? My crazy employees screaming that a ghost was here last night, and left a cart just in the entrance. The cameras said so, they said. "It was that" they said. "We saw it!". Well, hopefully they'll see me too after this day ends.

I no longer live here, because, obviously, you found my suicide note. Last thing to say is... that I am now laughing at the town. May you all accompany me someday and burn in ashes as I am right now, and you too reader, whoever you are. I'm laughing at you, and by the time, watching you from here.........

---Ed---

Buttons Blog Assignment 3#

The story begins when a bad boy named bill started saying bad words a lot of times. The next day his father heared him say something bad and he scolded him. After a week he heard it again swearing and he punished him again. Then after a few days he heard him again swearing so he tought of a punishment. Everytime he sweared he had to put a button in the button jar. The buttons came from his clothing so if he misbehave he will have no buttons on his clothes.

And by the looks of the picture he didn´t undertood his lesson. He continued swearing and swearing and putting and putting buttons in the jar. Then after a few months he watched how full the button jar was. He could barely put any more buttons into it. Next after all those months of swearing he couldn´t use his shirts cause they had no buttons. So he started to behave good. And every week he behaved good his father let him take out a few buttons out of the jar. And by the end of the year all his clothes were back with buttons again.

Blog assignment #3

You did quite a good job last time team, keep it up! Now, we must make our third assignment in our blog. Please check the Advanced Writing Blog: http://awprepauvm.blogspot.com/ to know about this assignment. Keep an open mind on this one team, since it might be the toughest work so far. The deadline is Saturday 14 11:00pm. For more details about what is a topic, concluding sentence, and time order, check your Writing book.

Remember team, 2 comments as always. Well made. And main work done in a completely new post. Title of the post is "Picture name (Blog Assignment #3)". Which means that picture name must be replaced by your chosen picture.

For last team... try not to pick the same picture that one of our members has for your post. That's all. Good luck on your writing and have fun!

Blog Assignment #2

Well ths subject of the advertisment is to inform of the new launch of the sporting tenis of addidas, the tachs F-50, a new inovative model for soccer players.
The targeted audience would be the soccer players of all the world who are interested in buying a new pair of tachs for practicing the sport.
The intended purpouse is to convince people this new model is better becuase you can take of the tachs to use them as tenishoes or to daily use and sporting use.
The ad is really achieving its purpouse becuase it has sold a lot of copies and is making further more inovative designs parting from this one.

Blog 2# Assignment

Well I think that the topic the ad is addressing is laziness, and its target audience can be anyone.
The purpose if the ad is to motivate poeple to pay atention to instructions, to get things right on the first place.
I think that the ad is successful as it illustrates perfectly what can happen to you if you don't pay atention to instructions. You would literlly be lost thanks to your ignorance.
In contraste, if you understand everything from the beggining, good things may happen to you.
This apply to everything, homework, your job and school.

"Start right you'll finish right"

Drugs Drag You Down.

As you can see on the tittle and on the image, this ad talks about drugs, a very common topic these days.
I think the target audience are all the persons, men and women, specially teenagers or persons who have suffered and had contact with drugs. The intended purpose is to explain that as everybody knows, the drugs are bad and as the image says, they can drag you down and just finish with your life.
I really think the image achieves it purpose because the hand is like getting pulled down and its a way to express what can the drugs make you.

I really dont have any special comment, because its a topic that you can hear in school, teachers, family, parents, brothers, so the only thing I can say, is that the drugs are bad, if you take them you're having a big risk, everyone should read more the newspapers so we can see the magnitude of the problems that this substance causes.

So i hope this image is good, and that it transfers something of seriousness. And try not to get in that bad habbit because your just not doing these damaging to you itself, to your family and friends also.
''So take care, be happy and avoid problems ;).''

Blog 2# Assignment

The subject of the ad is to show people how good is the coca cola drink and to show them that it will replenish their thirst. I think this ad doesn´t have an specific target audience because it can work for anyone that can afford a coca cola drink. The purpose of the ad is to make people see and realize that the coca cola is a good drink and it is healthy to drink it. They also make the people imagine a coca cola by using a description of it in the bottom and also with the amazing painting of it. They paint the glass to make it look cold and humid and tasty and even though you dont take the time to read the ad, you will see the picture and it could also work. The Ad is very succesful but I think that the bottom description shouldn´t be that long that way people will read it more and they will be convinced to buy that product.

A soothing ad

This advertisement shows the loss of a loved person. It is intented to those who have experienced this sort of misery. Principally, the main intention of this ad is to tell others not to lose hope. This ad, as my opinion, successfully demonstrates the depressive sadness someone has when you lose the love of that person, but because of the good interpretation, the viewer gets interested in the image, and reads that hope is not lost, which is what that person needs to do the most.

Many might say this picture fires both sides of the theme, depending on how you see it. I agree with the observation, but still stand firm on its usefulness. The loss of a beloved person makes us feel pretty lost, sad, angered, confused, excited, and hurt. People might hold this emotions too much and uninterestedly say it isn't so, when they actually realize on their minds how painfully true it is. Of course, there are always those who had no interest of loving someone since the beginning.

What this person feels is the return to reality. The serum that kept us in a comfortable life has vanished, and now we experience loneliness, the greatest fear of all humans even after death. Sadly, heartbroken humans close themselves for a long time or even forever, without actually listening to their conscience which screams for freedom. It is not good to close our feelings and opinions. At the end of our endurance, we get nothing, which is precisely what we wanted in that time, but at the very heavy cost of a wasted life.

Always give yourself, love, and everyone another chance. Be strong by saying you can do it. Never sink on the ship you ride, instead, fix it and make it stronger. Learn more and revive once again those beautiful experiences. Never give hope. There is always hope. There is no point on deceiving those you know. Do not pain yourself and others by doing so. Losing a person you love is terrible, and it is more if you never get to see him/her again, but that must not stop you! Keep learning, keep experiencing, keep living happiness. Show of what you're made of to those who challenge you. Smile to yourself in the hardest times, and most important of all, remark these solid words to your mind as to remember forever yourself...

"There is always hope"

Advertisement Jeopardy

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Time for the 2nd assigment team. This is a fairly easy one boys, but do not press your luck. Find the best advertisement you can, and post it in a unique post of yours, that means, to make a post like the one I just did. Follow the rules typed by the professor and do not slack-off.

On the commentaries section, you must write the too-much-of-an obvious-comment about the author's opinion in the ad., telling whether you agree or not in his comment and why. Do not make childish and unexperienced remarks without purpose. Make a good and solid comment by adding your own opinion of what you think of the advertisement as part of your agree/disagree comment, AND FORMULATE YOUR PROPOSITION OR THESIS YOU HAVE, which is the best thing to do.

For last, you have until this Saturday at 9:00pm. to finish. Good luck, and impress us!

Assignment #1 Feedback...

Fantastic job on the stories guys! Really good, I enjoyed all of them. Alain, Marcos and Erick Manuel will receive full individual credit for completing their story and for providing feedback to others. Leunam will receive partial individual credit because he did not complete the assignment. Sadly, Pablo will receive zero individual credit. This will also affect your team's grade. 

Remember, this is 20% of your final grade, step it up!!